2013年考研英语作文预测话题：沟通的意义

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句数量不足，可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用；作者词汇基础不错，注意极个别的拼写错误。

Communication is essential for all individuals to have a more wonderful live or build a harmony society. What as the follow are several advantages of communication with others. Communication is important for our life, such as, making friends with these people who have similar hobbies as you. In my opinion, communication with acquaintances or stragers is benefit for us to live better. Futhermore, communication with others can also help us get brave when we are facing setbacks. For example,once, I have had a big obstackle in my English study and thus become a ill-tempered person. It is the conversation that my teacher talked with me about my study that makes me up.