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Dear Mary， I am very glad that you were invited for me last month.In order to thank you for your invitation，I hope you could visit our hometown. Sichuan povince is my beautifui hometown,which is have many stories of legent.There are abundant glant pandas in chengdu，it is very cute.So,I really think that you should go to there. You can go to jiuzaigou for watch the scenery，it is have ruch and colour water，oh，very beautiful.Maybe,sanxingdui can make a little interested things for your visit,which have a lengts history for China culture,if you go to sanxingdui,you will more understand about our country .In general，there are many beautiful citise and scenic spots，I am looking foraword your arrival.
