2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用；文章使用了较丰富的词汇表达，学术词汇的使用也较灵活多样。

In modern society, science and technology is undergoing increasingly fast advancement while the moral standard of people is on tne lower level,which diminishes the trust between people.However,it is widely known that trust is vitally important for us to make friends,even to occupy a place in society.Excessive examples about maintaining trust has proved that keeping trust brings many advantages. In the bussiness community,bussinessman need keep trust to acquire much more cooperate parties,also to delay the cooperate time with a company.It is the same important to the medical community.You can not imagine what the world is like if patients lose trust with doctors. Of course, that parents are willing to send their children to school is also due to their trust with teachers. From what is mentioned,we can have a good knowledge of the importance of the maintaining trust.Hence it is deeply-rooted in our mind that if we everybody can believe in each other,our world will be a harmonious place.