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Dear Mary， I am more than glad that you were invited for me last month. In order to thank you for your invitation，I hope you could visit our hometown. Sichuan povince is my beautiful hometown, which have many stories of legend. There are plentiful giant pandas in chengdu，and it is very cute. Therefore , I really think that you should go there. To begin with you can go to jiuzaigou for watch the scenery，it is have variours and colour water，so，very beautiful. Maybe, sanxingdui museum can make a little interested things for your visit, which is a lengts history for China culture, if you go to sanxingdui, you will more understand our country . In general，there are many beautiful cities and scenic spots. Finally I am looking for aword your arrival.
