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Dear Mary， I am more than glad that you were invited for me last month. In order to thank you for your invitation，I hope you could visit our hometown. Sichuan province is my beautiful hometown, which have many stories of legend. There are plentiful giant pandas in chengdu，and it is very cute. Therefore , I really think that you should go there. To begin with you can go to jiuzhaigou watch the scenery，it have various and colour water，so，very beautiful. Maybe, sanxingdui museum can make a lots of interested things for your visit, which is a long history for China culture, if you go to sanxingdui, you will more understand our country . In general，there are many beautiful cities and scenic spots. Finally I am looking forward you can arrival.
