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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71623
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错;作者词汇量积累不错,也能较好的使用一些高级词汇。

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Dear Mary, I am more than glad that you are inviting me last month. In order to thank you for your invitation,I hope you could visit our hometown. Sichuan province is my beautiful hometown, which has many stories of legend. There are plentiful giant pandas in chengdu,and it is very cute. Therefore , I really think that you should go there. To begin with you can go to jiuzhaigou watch the scenery,it has various and colour water,so,very beautiful. Maybe, sanxingdui museum can make a lot of interested things for your visit, which is a long history for China culture, if you go to sanxingdui, you will more understand our country . In general,there are many beautiful cities and scenic spots. Finally I am looking forward to your arrival.

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