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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):有意义的生活

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:13浏览次数:9022
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Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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Each individual can do nothing about the length of life, but posses the priority to broaden, enrich, and fabricate the own life. In terms of the quality of life, the remark"The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it"absolutely convey a rigorous value belif. Under such circumstance, here apparantly arise a key question,worthy of our attention, that how to definite the meaningful life and how to achieve it. The standard is diversifed since dif

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