高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文中从句数量过少；结构良好，但是语言不流畅；可适当增加文中高级词汇的使用，注意文中个别拼写错误。

My Hometown was surrounded with green trees, the streams were clear and the fishes lived and swam happily. The houses were small and the streets were narrow. People were not rich those days, they worked all day long and get low income. Now there are tall buildings, stores and factories everywhere. Cars run on the roads. The developing industry caused the environment to change for the worse. There are not as many as trees than before and the fishes have been disappered. Now the most important thing for us is to reduce pollution and make the environment as good as before.