2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；作者英语功底扎实，可适当调整文中从句数量；文章词汇表达丰富，高级词汇使用较丰富，但拼写检查要重视。

From my perspective,with the technology developing and the qualities of people's live promoting,more and more people use the moblie phone.Actually,Using the moblie phone,we can surf the Internate in any time,which we are able to know the world as well as enjoying.What's more,it's convenient for us to chat with our friends. On the contrary,if we overuse the smart phone,it will do harm to us on some extent.First of all,some people always use their cell phone when they are crossing the street,which will be killed by the driving cars.Furthermore,it will make us in the unreal world since we chat with the friends who live in the instant place.Last but no least,overusing the cell phone,it will make different on our eyes seriously. Therefore,we are supposed to use the moblie phone approximately,not overusing it so as to we will have a health and comfortable life.