2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Beijing must be the first place we would like to take my foreign friend to see and visit. First, Beijing is our capital of China, it sufferd and exprienced thousand of years history. Beijing must be the first place we would like to take my foreign friend to see and visit. First, Beijing is our capital of China, it sufferd and exprienced thousand of years history.