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2013考研英语二图表作文预测:中国城市事故

发布时间:2013-07-05 15:54浏览次数:2873
要求:

The table below gives information about the numbers of accidents in a Chineses City in 2005. Write an essay of 160-200 words. Your essay should

1、describe the accidents in a chinese city

2、possible reasons

3、give your comment

You should write neatly on your ANSWER SHEET2.

用户的作文(系统评分75.5分
评语:

采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者句法知识扎实,可适当增加从句的使用;用词灵活多样,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。

用户练习作文:

The vehicle accident gradually become a serious issue in contemporary social life.According to the diagram given above,we are able to get clear glimpse of the crude fact,the most kinds of car accidents numbers having a rise. The most frequent cause to an accident is due to the carelessness,which should have had,yet such a huge number of drivers lacking.As a result,the drivers commit the mistakes with careless turning left or driving too close to escape from the others. While the other reason for a car accident is far from the same.Failing to give a signal,driving after alcohol both could contribute to a disaster,so does the pedestrians carelessness. So how can we prevent ourselves from such a tragegy?the answer is unquestionably being more viligent.Whenever you are drinving a car or walking through a crossroad,safty is the most important thing you should keep in your mind.

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