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As what we are talked in daily life, it is unwise to put eggs in one basket. That is to say, we should reduce risks according to investing in several ways as more as possible. Let me take my family for an example. Firstly,my father will do a investigation for the invested products before investing, including their future development, how to invest, how much he should invest, etc. Secondly, he will chose two or more things to invest, such as buying a house to rent and buying some stocks.Finally, we can get incomes in different time because of these investments. What the above said is why we should invest in different area. On the one hand, if my father just invested in housing instead of two above area, we could't get more profits from them. On the other hand, if just investing in housing and the development of the housing was poor, so we will fail to invest and bring the trouble to my whole family. In sum, during our life, it is important for each one to be careful and think more considerably. And it is in different baskets that it is wise to put the eggs.
