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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8973
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分74.0分
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文中用词灵活多样,但要注意增加使用高级词汇;句法方面做得很棒,但是从句不多;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒。

用户练习作文:

As we are taught by our parents in daily life, it is unwise and impolite to judge a person by their appearance. That is to say, those who are good or poor may not show their personality on their face. Let me take myself for an example. It was a rainy night and I walked to home alone. When running out the school without an umbrella, I felt a man following me. And I saw him, a poor-appearance man through a mirror. However when I was ready to run and avoid him, he went before me and gave me an umbrella.At that time, I was surprised and embarrassed. The experience above taught me that judging a person only through his or her appearance was stupid as a foolish. First of all, we can't know what they do and how they live. Secondly, it is possible to misunderstand them and miss a friendship. Therefore, only when we judge a person by communicating and getting along with him or her, can we know what they truelly are.

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