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They think it is a fashion to use mobile phones .On the other hand, They think it is very convenient to relate their families and friends by using mobile phones. They bring their mobile phones to the classroom. we often hear the ring of mobile phones in class. Some students make a message and play game on mobile phone in the class. In my opinion, The classroom needs quite. Because of there is a place where we to learn knowledges. They shouldn't use mobile phone in the class. We need concentrate on studies. The scool should make a rule to forbid students bring their mobile phone to class.
