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They think it is a fashion to use mobile phones. On the other hand, they think it is very convenient to contact their families and friends by using mobile phones. They bring their mobile phones to the classroom. We often hear the ring of mobile phones in class. Some students make messages and play games on mobile phone in the class. In my opinion, the classroom needs quite. there is a place where to get knowledge. They shouldn't use mobile phones in the class. We need concentrate on studies. The school should make a rule to forbid students to bring their mobile phone to class.
