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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10392
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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文章结构清晰,有效地采用了多种衔接方法;高级词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用。

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The way that putting all eggs in one basket means that someone pays all his attention on one thing or someone doesn’t leave other way for himself. Obviously, it is not a wise way to put all the eggs in one basket. Whatever we do, we should consider it carefully and roundly, in spite of success or failure. To some extent, we can’t be sure whether we could do something well or not, so it is important for us to come out several ways before we start to do something. When the first scheme fails, we can use the second one, it will greatly improve the possibility of our success. Otherwise, provided that we put all the eggs in one basket, when the basket falls on the ground, you can do anything because all the eggs have been broken, you even don’t have any opportunity to remedy it. In a word, before you decide to do something, please consider more.

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