小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend. She was my roommate of my high school. From the first day I met her, she looks fatter than me. Now she is more plump. We are almost same tall. She is outgoing and like to talk. She could easily make a normal thing lovely and funny, especially when she speak a story. Every story from her mouth, the story become attractive.