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How to use your life most greatly? I personally think the greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it. Most of us know that the life acommpanjes with chore things. For instance, people have to working hard for house and car, women have to worry about the second pregnace, as well as men have to work harder and harder for his family. In the whole progress, human beings alway easy to forget the primary dream. The daily life is tired of course but it should not become the excuse to escap the primary dream. When we was young, we alway has some dream to become a better guy, maybe scientist, or politics....But the busy and boring daily life alway let us forget that. It is obvious to image the common people's whole life: nothing important. All in all, life is only once and there are no remedy to give you to repraise. So, you should spend your life to do something that will outlast it.
