2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

文中词汇使用灵活，高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间，另外请认真检查词汇的拼写；作者句法知识扎实，可适当增加从句的使用；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅。

Some times we may complain about that there are so much unfair businesses happen on society,while be an onlooker do not contribute to solve the problems.Just as the proverb goes,Never go out there to see what happen,go out there to make something happen. Everything are difficult before they are easy.A case in point is the hero castro.IT was 1950,notwithstanding citizens of Cuba were living in hell,everyone was struggling to survive,but noone dared to rebel.It was then castro realised that only by aginsting the administers can gain a new enviroment which people can get richer,and be free of the heavy tax,and say goodble to idle goverment.After 10 years fighting with the enermy,he leaded the people of Cuba to a brightful future and finaly gained the liberation.It was he went out there to mke some changes which made him a hero,not just watching. In a nut shell,one for all,all for me,we should be responsible and partake in volunteer for what happen aroud us so that things will change better.