新东方托福高分作文:面对面的交流是交流方式中比较好的一个吗?

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Communication is a significant role in our daily life and every one has their own option to talk to others,some people like face-to-face communication because this way could provide they a sense of safity and realty.And the others believe that other types of communication,such like email and telephone,is a better way to talk that could save some much time and make more profits in some business conditions.In my opinion,deciding which one is a better way to communication depends on the special sites,the special conditions. Face-to-face communication suits these kinds of enviroment that want to develop a more deeper relations.For instance,I prefer to have a talk with my friends and parents,which could make me feel happy and safe because I can actually touch them,and I can truely feel the distances with them become shorter.The most aderventage of this type of communication,I think,is helping us find a reality sense to talk with the person we really want to keep touch with.Of course,if we are not at the same site,we need other types of communication to help us. The ways of communication,like letters and emails,immiditaly make our life more convenient.Because of the unfair balance of finance,some people have to leave their hometome,their family,and go to another city to make a living.Thanks to the new technologh,modern people would make communication with their family member in spare time by telephone or Internet.And when it comes to business trade,business men prefer to write email to the parter instand of face-to-face communication,which would make much waste. We can't decide which type of communication is better than others in one condition.Each way has its own benefits so that it's best to make different decision depend on different enviroment.