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A Beautiful City In China Hello my friend,I'm very happy to know that you will visit our country,you say you like chinese culture and chinese food.Okay,next,let me introduce my hometown Sichuan to you.Sichuan is a beautiful provence where located by many mountain around it.With so many trees and sweet water,there are also many pandas and many famous places,such as,Jiuzhaigou,Dujiangyan,The hometown of Libai,the living house of Dufu ect.All of these places are famous for themselves natural cultures.Therefor,if you come to China.I will take you to visit all of these places.Then,I want to introduce our chinese food to you.Sichuan is famous for it's hot.Because we can make so many hot foot,and it tasted delicious and flexible.when you can eat pungent food you will not give it up.Except it's tastes is so good,the color and smell are also preaty good.Thus you must enjoy our Sichuan cuisine. That's all,I will waitting for you to come my hometown,come on soon.
