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English is one of the most important subjects in our study.The language is also the way of communicating between countries.However,recently I found that some of you had lost their confidence in learning English because of the bad grades and the stress given by your parents and teachers.At the bottom of my heart,I felt sad about it since I was concerned about your grades.Thus I'd like to tell you the importance of learning English.First,learning a foreign language helps you develope your ability of understanding and imagination.Also,English is a kind of useful language which can have effect on your future especially when you are applying for a job.Now that you may realize you need to learn English harder to make progress.My suggestions on improve the English are as follow.One of the most effective ways is that you have to practice speaking English more to form the sense of the language.What is more,it is really good for you to write diaries in English everyday ,which make you become more interested in English .In my view,the interests are the best teachers.Last but not least important,you ought to do more exercise.I hope all of you are able to learn English well in future
