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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11298
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒。

用户练习作文:

With the development of modern science and technology,more and more people are continually use of phones. Indeed, it's convenient instrument in our life. In the meantime, we must realize these advantages and disadvantages of the mobile phone. First of all, we can see some problems form the picture, for example: people are crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in oder to see. As far as I know, it is not only damage our eyes, but also security threat to our life. Second, the phone may make negative and lazy thinks for our students. So, it is very terrible. Therefore, we can reach the following conclusion that everything has two sides, and the mobile phone is not exception, it has both disadvantages and advantages. Hence, it's very important of correct use the phone.

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