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With the rapid development of science and technology,it is possible that people live in the virtual world.What is more,nowadys.more and more people are fond of the style of live.Therefore,what happen will people spend increasing time in the virtul world instead of interacting in the real world? In my point of view,it is necessary for us to spend time in the virtual world,but it is of greater necessity for us to interact with real world.There are two reasons to support my point.For one thing,the real world is the place in which we set real relationship with family and friends,which is the rource of our life.Further more,the fun we get in the virtual world based on development of our real world and only we promote the development of virtual world by interacting in the real world. In a short,every coin has its two sides.As a college student,I admit we can not entirely leave virtual world in the age,but I think of it is only a part of our life.
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