句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;作者词汇表达比较灵活多变,尤其是高级词汇使用较恰当。
With the rapid development of science and technology,it is possible that people live in the virtual world.What is more,nowadays,more and more people are fond of the life style.Therefore,what happens will people spend increasing time in the virtual world instead of interacting in the real world? From my point of view,it is necessary for us to spend time in the virtual world,but it is of greater necessity for us to interact with the real world.There are two reasons to support my point.For one thing,the real world is the place in which we set real relationship with family and friends,which is the resource of our life.Furthermore,the fun we get in the virtual world based on development of our real world and only we promote the development of virtual world by interacting in the real world. In short,every coin has its two sides.As a college student,I admit we can not entirely leave the virtual world in the age,but I think of it is only a part of our life.
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