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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40870
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分73.5分
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作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;可适当增加高级词汇的使用量;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

用户练习作文:

As we all know that it is not wise for us to get conclusion just by seeing or listening. We need to have our own ability to judge whether it is truth. With the development of media , there are more and more news which we may can't distinguish whether it's true or not . Some of them are even just want to disperse the gossip in order to attract people's attention . And if we just believe what they wrote or they even had some video to show you , believe me ,they may just want you to trust what they want you to believe. However if we choose to believe them without even thinking about them , we may get into trouble made by them . What's more we may even spread that kind of news unconsciously. That makes us become a kind of zimbies without thinking ! In order to protect ourselves and people we love ,we need to think them twice before we believe in them.

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