雅思写作范文:父母应该多陪孩子

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spend more time with your baby In China, both of the parents are busy with their jobs. With the development of economy, people tend to pursue high quality living conditions. Most of the parents try their best to offer their children comfortable circumstances, but they seldom have time to stay with their children. In my point, no matter how busy they are, they should make the best use of their time to stay with their children and make them happy. In my opinion, the main reason is the modern city life rhythm is fast, working pressure, parents are busy working, less time with their children together, so it's easy to cause psychological neglect to children for a long time. Especially in the countryside, there are many left-behind children, their parents were migrant workers, they live with my grandparents, every year New Year's day, they can see their parents, if parents don't go home, they didn't see their parents and even a few years. Parents'' love of children is that no one can replace. Parents' behavior will affect the child's life. If at this stage the lack of adequate to the child the image of the world is the lack of parents with children, is not conducive to the formation of personality and perfect. I don't know if parents find their children love to play games and read the book with his parents. I hope parents can spend more time with your children, I hope you could tell they stories, answer the questions and enjoy the time that what you and your children do together Please take some more time with children,don't watch him playing,but the more time you play with him,the more happiness. Finally, I hope that parents should not ignore the family education, parents should spend more time with their children, encourage them, make them happy learning, let them happy life, let them have a happy childhood.