字数:200满分:100分
文中从句数量不足;采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者用词灵活多样,但要注意文中极个别拼写错误。
Look this lovely girl in the picture above! Absolutely she is an foreigner,from the information maybe an American,but with a Chinese traditinal costume,there is of no weirdo at all but gorgeous greatly. From a long period,Chinese culture has been seen as outdated,so has the Chinese costume style. A country ,pocessing a long history,was been beaten and derided.How shameful it is? But with the startling development of economics,mostly attributed to the opening and reforming policies,the ancient lion has waked up again. As a result,the culture regained its influence,and more foreigner was going to know our culture,foods and costumes once again. Now,back to image,where an American girl smiles delightly,we should be proud of it and never stop to become much more stronger and influential.