2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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dear tom ,today i will do some intoduce about my hometown to you .My hometown libo is one of the beautifful cities in the south westen China.LiBo also is a very pupuler tourist visit place .In there you not only enjoy the nature singhting but also eating some wonderful natisit foods. In Libo ,there have a doufu it smell is allfuled but when you tast it is very good ,and there have a noodle it is also like the doufu,have a bad smell but tast is very good!When you arrivel here please feel free to call me ,i will feel very happy as you guide to take you to feel realy LIBO pepoel 's life style.