小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

I have a good friend. She was my roommate of my high school. From the first day I met her, she looked fatter than me. Now she is more plump. But that does not impact her impression in my mind at all. She is outgoing and like to talk. In most cases, she could easily make a normal thing lovely and funny, especially when she speaks a story. Every story from her mouth, the story become attractive.