2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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My views on Online Shopping Currently,shopping online has become a fanshion,growing individuals go shopping on the Internet.It not only bring convenient to us,but also many problems.For exmaple,you may buy clothes without thinking,therefore,you will waste your money. From my own perspective,shopping on line has drawbacks and advantages,thus,I desire to give several advice .Firstly, you would better think over before purchase,so that you can get what you really want. Secondly,you must pay a great attention to satety,because shopping on line is not really safe. That's all I want to say.