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I'm against the idea of banning the private transport. As far as I'm concerned, if we ban the private transports, how people go out? One solution would be everyone fights for space to take a bus,which cause lots of conflict in our society. On one hand, the population in China are huge, it's impossible to produce lots of buses to take, it's impossible to wait the public transport for everyone, it's impossible to deal with traffic jam. On the other hand, it don't have efficency for those who should do something quickly. To sum up, it's not a good choice to ban private transport.
