2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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My views on Online Shopping Currently,shopping online has become a fashion,a growing number of people go shopping on the Internet.It not only brings convenience to us,but also many problems.For example,you may buy clothes without thinking,therefore,you will waste your money. From my own perspective,shopping on line has drawbacks and advantages,thus,I desire to give several pieces of advice .Firstly, you would better think over before purchase,so that you can get what you really want. Secondly,you must pay a great attention to safety,because shopping on line is not really safe. In a word,coins have two sides.You ought to make a decision by yourself .