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从句使用很不错，再接再厉；文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；作者能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇，但拼写方面要再接再厉。
The Benifits of Travelling Peter Buck, a famous Americans female writer,once said:"The world is a book, those who do not travel read only a page." It means to tell us the significant benefits of travelling,and travelling outside by yourself is to see the rest of world rather than reading inside. Ancients of China said:" The knowlege from book is easy,and you must practice if you want to know this statement obviously."Travelling can award you georgous preface and make you youngers. When you are reading,you just learn life other people.As we know, you can learn the happiness of others which is not belong to you. However you study hard,those experience belongs to others rather than you, so you must experience outside by youself,you will earn experiences which belongs to you. The benefits of travelling have more, you need to experience by youself
