错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;词汇表达灵活丰富请继续保持,也能较好的使用一定的高级词汇;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
Now,the society is an open group which we live and in any jobs everyone should communicate with others in any jobs. With the development of the internet,there are more and more electronic communication tools,such as QQ、weixin and so on.Those tools are based on the internet. Internet brings the unprecedent changes in the daily life, expecially the interpersonal communication.In the past,if we need communicate with one,we may write him a letter.This way may spend lots of times which could miss some important thing.But now we can use cellphone,QQ or weixin which can communicate with others on line as soon as possible. As long as we want,we can get in touch with anybody every time.It also allow us to send pictures.All of this are ascribed to internect. So the advent of internet has improved the communication among people.It also makes information widespread on time.
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