句法很棒,若适当增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩;用词灵活多样,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
Now,the society is an open group which we live and everyone should communicate with others in any jobs. With the development of the internet, there are more and more electronic communication tools, such as QQ、WeiXin and so on. Those tools are based on the internet. Internet brings the unprecedent changes in the daily life, especially in the interpersonal communication. In the past, if we need to communicate with one, we were likely to write him a letter. This way may spend lots of times which may let us miss some important business. But now we can use cellphones,QQ or WeiXin which can communicate with others on line as soon as possible. As long as we want, we can get in touch with anyone at any time. It also allow us to send pictures. All of these are ascribed to the internet. So the advent of internet has improved the communication among people.It also makes information widespread on time.
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