2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I felt extremlly delighted to hear that you will come to my hometown,which is very beautiful. Therefore,I want to say,There are two reasons for my favorite hometown.Initially,it has mountains and river which green.What is more,there are lots of special of buildings,given us a kind of best fridship.Last but not least, they are both friendship,which Welcome to my hometone. In short,you can try come to here.