2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；作者词汇表达较丰富，高级词汇需继续加强，拼写检查要重视。

I felt extremelly delighted to hear that you will come to my hometown,which is very beautiful. Therefore,I want to say,There are two reasons for my favorite hometown.Initially,it has mountains and rivers which is green.What is more,there are lots of special of buildings,giving us a kind of best friendship.Last but not least, they are both friendship,which Welcome to my hometone. In short,you can try to come to here.