2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；文章词汇使用比较恰当，高级词汇积累不足；可适当增加几条从句。

I felt extremelly delighted to hear that you will come to my hometown,which is more than beautiful. Therefore,I want to say,There are two reasons for my favorite hometown.Initially,it has mountains and rivers which is green.What is more,there are lots of special of buildings,giving us a kind of best friendship.Last but not least, the people here are friendly who is easy to life together. In short,you can try to come here.