2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

结构良好，但是语言不流畅；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；作者词汇量提升空间很大，高级词汇使用要加强，单词拼写要认真。

On the cartoon，People are crossing the street looking at their cell phone and using walking sticks in order to see.From the picture ,it is easy to get the meaning that cengmi to cell phone is not good for us. Nowaday,as the development of cell phone,more and more people possess cell phone and deply on it.There are no denying the fact that phones convenienced us in many aspects,and brought us happiness.