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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11364
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;作者词汇基础不错,注意极个别的拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

On the cartoon,People are crossing the street looking at their cell phone and using walking sticks in order to see.From the picture ,it is easy to get the meaning that cengmi to cell phone is not good for us. Nowaday,as the development of cell phone,more and more people possess cell phone and deply on it.There are no denying the fact that phones convenienced us in many aspects,and brought us happiness.But we can not ignore its temptation,once can not resist its temptation,we would spend lots of time on it ,while not to work or study.In addition,phone is an important tool,a tool,so we should learn how to use it by good method.

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