小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend. She was my roommate of my high school. From the first day I met her, she looked fatter than me. Now she is more plump. But that does not impact her impression in my mind at all. She is outgoing and like to talk. In most cases, she could easily make a normal thing lovely and funny, especially when she speaks a story. Every story out of her mouth, the story become attractive. I thought all these ability are because she like reading and writing. When conversation is a less problem, making friends are easier.