采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较好的使用部分高级词汇;可适当增加从句的使用。
There exists a problem of what is happiness. Quite a few people say that happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with it. I tend to think that it is true you will be more happy when you solve a problem than no problem. First of all, if we absent problems, every day will be the same day. There is no change and challenge any more. Life is bland, which absence of motivation of living. Besides, what we expect is not the answer of the problem, but a progress of success. When we solve a problem, the rapture comes together. What more, happiness can be proved from some famous people like Adison who invented the lamp, it is a kind of happiness for him when he deal with the problem of lamp. Taking all these into account, we can draw a conclusion that absence of problems does not equal with happiness, by contrast, coping with problems can.