假设你是某公司销售助理王海,请给David Smith先生写一封回信,内容包括:
1感谢对方订购100箱衬衫;
2建议用纸箱而不用木箱装运,并列举纸箱的优点;你公司最近与别的美国公司交易中也用过纸箱,效果很好;
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Dear David Smith
增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;作者词汇基础不错,高级词汇使用比较灵活;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。
Dear David, Many thanks for your previous order.As for transport,I would like to suggest that we use paper boxes instead of wooden ones.In our recent transactions with other parters,primarily from the US,we chosed paper boxes which had been proved more cost saving and transport convenient.Our paper boxes are water proof and work well even in the rainy days.Please let me know if you are agree with the method,so that we could dispatch the shirts asap. Regards Hai Wang Sales Manager XXX Company
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