2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；文中高级词汇使用熟练，在单词拼写方面要继续努力；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

In current society, computer has becamed an objet indispensable in our daily life. obviousily,there are some positive and negative impacts. when it comes to couputer, people have different views. some people hold that computer is so important in our life. firstly, it can make our life and job esier bacause we can use it to shopping online, processing problems, read news... Secondly, it also changed our world. For example, it bomm our ecnomie and offered us so many opportunities. On the contrary, others believed that even there are so many goodness, but it also bring us negative impacts. To begin with, it threathen our health,eyesight,mental health... on the other hand, it do damage to our interpersonal relastionship. We are more difficult to meet some friends because we don't want to get out and we just have online friends. As far as I am concerned, I still in favor of the former one. I think it is our pleasure to have this invention. It really give us so many surprises. But,we should attach importance on how much time we have paid on computer and how much cost have we paid?