2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I'm so glad to hear you are going to my hometown.There are so many delicious foods and kindly people in Zi Gong. If you are willing to eat spicy food,you can try the hot pot.It's very great and Chinese like to eat it no matter summer or winter.There are kinds of foods in the hot pot,you can eat what you like.And Zi Gong lantern show is famous far and wide.People make some dolls like historical personage,animals and so on.I'm sure it will must be attractive to you. I'm willing to be your tour guide.