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people all have a commmon habits that we like to have a conclusion when we see something happend or hear something.But i want say,it's not encough smart,and even have a little foolish.A says: see by eyes not alawys is truth. So i wanner tell you that plase keep silence for 3 minutes when you want do something importent. Everybody can't live alone in the world.we unconciderable words can bring some heart to somone who live around us.Everybody must take responsibility for what we say,and we are adult.As far as my concernd we should keep clarm what ever we see or heard.
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