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2007年6月英语六级作文真题:学雷锋

发布时间:2013-05-14 23:47浏览次数:1092
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Should one expect a reward when doing a good deed 
1.有的人认为应该有回报 
2.另外的人认为应该象雷锋一样不要回报 
3.我的看法 
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作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;作者句法知识较为扎实,可增加复合句和从句使用;过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富,层次欠清晰。

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Should one expect a reward when doing a good deed How do you think someone ask reward after they did good deed ? I believe you have many ideas on this subject . Some of you think the reward can encourage people to do more good thing . Some of good-behaviors risk their life to save people ,they deserve the reward . The other people think they should not ask the reward just act like LeiFeng who never expect the reward . Those good-behaviors are thought to be hero of us and to protect us according to their willing not reward . I think that both ideas have their logical .Reward is good for encouraging more people to join the good-behaviors team . My idea is that we do the good deed not wish to get the reward just from our duty .

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