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Should one expect a reward when doing a good deed How do you think someone ask reward after they did good deed ? I believe you have many ideas on this subject . Some of you think the reward can encourage people to do more good thing . Some of good-behaviors risk their life to save people ,they deserve the reward . The other people think they should not ask the reward just act like LeiFeng who never expect the reward . Those good-behaviors are thought to be hero of us and to protect us according to their willing not reward . I think that both ideas have their logical .Reward is good for encouraging more people to join the good-behaviors team . My idea is that we do the good deed not wish to get the reward just from our duty .