小学三年级英语作文:My school

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My school My school is beautiful.There are five floor in it,so it is tall.There are three buildings in my school.They are red,they have many cartoons on the wall,that is beautiful.My school are old,but it isn't simple.It is old,but you can't see it like old,you just can see it's like beautiful it's like younger. I love my school,because I can play with my friends and the study is like play so I can play in the class.In my free time I can go to the libruary to read some books.In P.E class I can do sports ,and I can swing,too! I love my school,because it's beautiful and I can play in the beautiful school.I think I am lucky in my school.