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What’s your opinion that someone want to get a reward when doing a good deed ? I believe you have many ideas on this subject . Some of you claim the reward can encourage people to do more good matters. Some of good-behaviors risk their life to set aside people ,they deserve the reward. The other ones think they should not ask the reward just act like LeiFeng who never expect the reward. Those good-behaviors are thought to be a hero of us and to protect us in accordance with their chart not reward. I have a thought that the both notions have their logic. The reward is beneficial to motivate more folks to join the good-behaviors team. My opinion is that we do the good deed not wish the reward just from our duty.